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I recently bought and read the novel Bounce of Aces and the Mystery of Duchess Valentine and I have some constructive criticism: 1. If you just tone down the alluring cover-art so that a person going to read it isn't instantly captivated and entranced by the beauty and detail of the overall incredible design, that would help... 2. The story seems a bit "award-winning"... Although everybody wins in the end, it doesn't come off as a sappy Disney movie ending. Were you feeling like an overachiever that day? The flow of events is simple and enjoyable with a steady pace that doesn't bore or confuse the reader: that is not something you want in a

A Bit of Exposition… By: DE Pennington Jr. Hello, everyone, my name is now Nohbdy. For those of you who like to maintain "eye contact", just stare at my sunglasses. Why am I "now" Nohbdy you ask may ask? Well, due to a "freak accident" at a dermatology laboratory, I wish to no longer refer to my self as DE Pennington Jr. Aside from the opportunity to be naked in public if I so wish I also have a few other "privileges". I can make the clothes the incident happened in disappear, I can help or hurt anyone with skin issues, I can pass through solid objects and I can teleport. Thankfully, I can still learn various other abilities. However a

The Illusions of the Mind By: D.E. Pennington The hot running water of the shower quickly warmed my body after a cold day at school. After drying off when I got out, I moisturized my skin, got dressed and found a book in the living room awaiting her arrival. Around 6 o'clock, Tequila came through the door. "Have you ever been hypnotized?" "That's an odd opener." "It's still an honest question." "No, Tequila… I haven't." "Well, Ellen, you're very susceptible to hypnotic induction and suggestion." "How do you know?" "You want to try it." "Okay, suspicious, what do I have to do?" "Relax and take several deep breaths." In minutes

The Immanitus Versus the Adsecla (Daemons) By: D.E. Pennington Jr. Chapter 2: Vanessa As I sauntered down the dark avenue my mind raced with anxiety. What if she wakes up? What if she attacks me? What if her father is already there? So many things can go wrong! I could end up dead! No! I have to do this! I owe it to her to reveal her true identity. It is my job as her mother to help her achieve her full potential. I finally found the house. Her father did a great work hiding her… I transformed to avoid detection. A quick chant opened a portal into her room. I hung from the ceiling inches from her faces. She was so beautiful… th